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Miss Potter (2006)
IMDB rating: 7.30
Plot: Thirty years old and single, Beatrix Potter lives in London with her social-climbing parents, who are exasperated that she has turned down any number of eligible young men. Her only real friends are the animals which since childhood she has lovingly drawn and made up stories about. She finally succeeds in selling a book of the stories, and it becomes Norman Warne’s first project. He quickly falls in love with both the book and Beatrix and together they carefully arrange publication. This proves the first of many successes, offering her the possibility of escaping from both her parents’ way of life and London.
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Directors: Noonan Chris
Actors: McGregor Ewan,Paterson Bill,Owen Lloyd,Lesser Anton,Bamber David,Middleton Chris,Jenkins Oliver,Mulholland Richard,Biography,Drama,
do you think this is a good manga plot?
PLZ DO NOT STEAL THIS IDEA
story line:
when a young boy named Link ventures into a forest of this remote island that his dad just found, he finds this young girl named cheza that looks very starnge. She has falcon shaped eyes, big claws, huge pair of teeth, and feather like hair. She says shes a gryphon. Then the boy had to leave the island(not sure why yet) but as he was leaving he gives her a pendent. And, by doing that he unlocked a great power within the girl. 12 years later Link became i reasarcher and finally was able to go back to the island. He surched for over a year for ceza. but she wasn’t there, no one was. so he dicided to just give up. So then link dicides to go back to school and finds ceza there. He later finds out that she was banished with her older brother, Jiro, because she found out that she is part human. So the three of them learn verious things at the school. about a month after starting there second year a crazy scientis soon learns what ceza and jiro are and dicides to go look to see if there are any others. He soon finds the island where ceza is from and dicivors a group of scary looking men. Right before his eyes they change into these savage beasts called dementors (not like in harry potter lol) which are the one enemy of a gryphon. He then makes a pack with them and returned to the school with the demonters to kill ceza and jiro. So one evening the demonters,with the crazy man, attack the trio. As they fight the Crazy man dicides at the very end not to kill them but capture jiro and link to see if a human can become a gryphon. Ceza is Ferious and starts to hunt him. As she is looking for link and jiro she finds her family. She asks if she could recieve assintance but her father refuses becasue she is still part human. Ceza then is SUPER pissed and "snaps" becomes this beautiful glossy black and white gryphon with purple eyes. she then finds out that she recived this power when she first met link and recived the pendent that she has always kept with her. Her clan calls this the "guardian bond". This can only happen with a human and a gryphon. Becasue of this her father dicides to let her back into the clan. she then flys with her new body and recuses link and jiro. But sadly in the process of escaping her brother is killed in the fight with the group of demonters.
and that is as far as i have gotton. I have actually started on the manga but i’m just having second thoughts.
if i somehow manage to fulfill my dream a somehow plubish this, would you read it?
also ingore the miss spellings please
look interesting enough, and very fantasy… but i feel like there’s something amiss. it’s kinda easy to guess what would happened next, so i think you need more twists there… like cheza had a memory loss or something like that.
try something a little different because to me, the plot seems typical. why not make it into something interesting, like ceza’s power ran out of control, but for some reason, it couldn’t be stopped unless link was with her or something like that.
if you have an editor/beta-reader, you could ask him or her for some advices or suggestions.
hope that would help.
cdgal | Jan 30, 2010
No.
Larin | Jan 30, 2010
yes it is=]
Sakura | Jan 30, 2010
sounds interesting. i would read it if the manga isnt filled with so much spelling error
Seungri
| Jan 30, 2010
sounds good though her brother dying i reckon if you want him to die then he should die before the girl gryphon meets the boy link and she should have some kinda depressing past or something maybe to do with what makes her half human
Ann | Jan 30, 2010
